A Dangerous Friendship - Part 3
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Still annoyed about breakfast, Anne, while on her way to school, thinks about two years ago: “Time has gone so fast”. She is thinking about the transition from primary school to secondary school. Anne remembers it as if it were yesterday. Together with her friends, she had held a big party to celebrate the friendship that had been and would always be. From an early age, Anne has known that she wants to be a veterinarian. To do this, she needs at least a VWO diploma. By choosing a different school, Anne knew that she would see Jasmine, Katja, Jessica, Fleur and Simone less often. They would stay in touch as much as possible via WhatsApp, Instagram and Facebook. Surely she would be a bit connected this way.
Since starting secondary school, Anne quickly feels like an outcast. She is looked at strangely by many students. She feels her eyes on her over and over again as she enters the classroom. It feels like the eyes that look at her are branding her. Every day she gets these looks, which make her sweat break out. She would love to leave this place, but that's not possible. Again and again, she dives into each other with uncertainty. Her appearance doesn't really help Anne either, she has a completely different clothing and hair style. Anne prefers to wear dungarees topped with an open blouse that is far too big for her. She wears her long, brown, curly locks in a casual ponytail as standard. She rarely wears makeup, she thinks it's nonsense to make herself up. She only does this when there is a special occasion, which is at most once or twice a year. This whole big picture, together, makes it clear that she is anything but a city girl. Anne was born and grew up in a small farming village just outside the big city, about half an hour by bike from the school. Here, everyone knows each other and everyone is there for each other when necessary. She likes to spend her free time playing Netflix with friends, taking a walk in nature or riding a horse.
