A girl in the sunlight
I spread out my umbrella, casting a shadow to shield me from visibility.
But I am behindhand.
She steps into the streetlight.
I slowly start to pant and drop my umbrella.
The light flickers. My heart pounds. She raises her arm.
Time stops.
The only indication of motion is the amber light flickering against her outstretched arm.
The flickering light is in an astonishing rhythm with the pounding of my heart.
Teasing me for succumbing to this forbidden emotion and sentiment.
Have you ever heard of a phantom feeling warmth before?
I wake up, nonplussed by the repeating dream of mine.
The way you glow through my blinds in the morning
It makes me feel like you missed me.
If it wasn’t for you, I could sleep forever.
But I’m not mad.
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Vivek
3 years ago
Wow this is such a creative post. Really applaud you
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kevinbacca92
3 years ago
Interesting your poem the illustration very much in accordance with what you want to express in your lines, I think you have been able to express and capture the reader's attention. Excellent.
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Rasher
3 years ago
His words make me reflect on many things it's like imagining everything reading is one of the best things his poem is extravagant
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Franny
3 years ago
Both the illustration and the poem are very worked and beautiful at the same time write an art and you do it very well
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Alberto
3 years ago
wonderful can i imagine that scene reading every part of the poem has a lot of young talent my greatest congratulations to you
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Toto Animo
3 years ago
Beautifully written about your repetitive dream and the colorful print you added to it appeals to me very much.
enigma
3 years ago
What a beautiful way of writing you have.
Lilith Rose
3 years ago
I love how the drawing has serenity in it but then you see the girl and her eyes and the creepyness washes over. very well done
De verhalenheks
3 years ago
Very nice poem, beautifully written. I also really like the prayer card that you used with it, really fitting.
floresisaidi
3 years ago
Very nice poem friend I love it in the way every word she writes and when reading it it is as if there is in that poem what a great talent
alexandersolano091
3 years ago
very picturesque your story is passionate to see that lady and succumbing to our feelings is not bad
ellesvandenbroek
3 years ago
Beautiful! I love the poem. The picture is inspiring to me.
Yvonne Coppens
3 years ago
What a beautiful poem, written with feeling and emotion. I love that very much. Thank you for sharing.
Leo 1
3 years ago
In poetry, you can get rid of all your emotions and fantasy in a way that you would not verbally consider expressing yourself in that way. That's why this is a nice close that is written with feeling.
Buena Música
3 years ago
You were greatly inspired by creating these beautiful lines, congratulations on that gift of persuasive writing, I started reading and didn't leave until I finished the last word
bloguerouniversal
3 years ago
I simply have one word to describe this poem: sublime . . I look forward to a next post full of charm and a lot of creativity like this
willbelysy
3 years ago
I loved this beautiful poem, there are writings that can be seen as a work of art, for me, this is one of them.
gabriellysmendez
3 years ago
In every dream, we can connect with what we really want or feel at a certain time! Thank you for sharing one of them with us!
Dewaputra
3 years ago
It is soothing to indulge in the wonderful world of your dreams and I agree some dreams might go on for ever, but then the alarm pulls you back and you awake.
Arukah Tsur
3 years ago
For now a dream that brings warm emotions to surface that phantom feeling that comes in the sleep. Do you ever see the face? Nice poem, so many possibilities.
Estrella
3 years ago
It's very sweet is a poem to read and then reflect on reading and imagining and recreating the story in your mind
Rudy Siedlecki 🌳
3 years ago
This is a beautiful dreamy love poem and the photo shows exactly what the title names. But that the street lights are still on and the sun is shining, that is only possible in a dream.
Daniel
3 years ago
Your design of the poem is excellent you make them? Well, the poem is an art form
Freli
3 years ago
You added a very beautiful cover illustration, the words are just right and as beautiful as something that came out of your heart.
Gollo
3 years ago
It is very well written and I loved this beautiful poem and it is a very nice title that goes with the image is very good I congratulate you.
Alfred
3 years ago
It is fascinating to me to know how long it takes him to be poems as beautiful as these? I am fascinated by the writing
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