A Loud Rage 2:1

6 min read · 02 Jan 2022 · 21 · 10 · 12

CHAPTER 2

Incubation?

Part 1.

“Stop that!” Sister Bernie was running down the corridor towards the convent dormitory where a bunch of boys were cheering a fight on. “Stop that at once!” she demanded. But the cheering continued unabated.

As Sister Bernie broke through the wall of cheering boys and they realised that she was there they immediately dispersed in any direction they could. Being caught cheering meant that they too would be punished.

Russel was sitting on top of Pierre, he was dishing out ‘punishment,’ to a cheeky little six-year-old in grade one that had defied his authority as his senior in the dorm. As the ten-year-old Russel’s fist came down towards Pierre’s face for the umpteenth time, Sister Bernie caught the hand in mid-air.

“I said stop that!” a furious Sister Bernie pulled Russel to his feet with a yank! “What the hell are you doing?” Russel was a bully. He had been since he came to the convent, a big boy for his age, but not big on respect and manners.

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12 comments

Ingrid

3 years ago

So far, I like that teacher. Despite the bite, she knows it's not directed against her personally, but looks beyond her nose long. What is the cause.

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rockstar

3 years ago

this chapter about the dominant sister is like watching a kind of family movie where the way children are raised and treated will have a consequence of how a human being grows up I wait for the next chapter

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Toto Animo

3 years ago

You have described this fight and the underlying thoughts and emotions very well. You feel like Sister Bernadette immediately committed to Pierre.
I'm waiting for the sequel

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Daniel

3 years ago

The story is very good I love how you make it is intriguing the part where the fights are found

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Fahim Islam

3 years ago

The great thing about writing a story is that you can let your imagination run wild. So reality and fiction need to be integrated when creating a clear and concise story...

Alberto

3 years ago

I am a reader of many stories and I like yours, it's like I get into the plot of the story and it's great

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Gollo

3 years ago

Good but I only see blows and blows well I'll wait to see the next chapter to see how your story continues.

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Leo 1

3 years ago

The great thing about writing stories is that you can let your own imagination go ahead. Unifying reality and fiction while still making a legible and conclusive story.

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ELINA RICKURA

3 years ago

I was caught by this story. I will look for the previous chapter to follow the plot. It will surely be as interesting and unexpected as this. We'll see what follows. Congratulations on your great imagination.

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Arukah Tsur

3 years ago

@ELINA RICKURA Thank you Elina1 Your feedback is greatly appreciated!