Ivy and being simple

Simple as that, this is the next one in the row. Maybe today it new Wednesday, but anyway hope You'll enjoy <3 #10bywednesday

"The tree made me a house, it's a surprise of life time!" - shouted Ivy with widest smile the world has seen. "What do you thing, Rhythm Bee, was it a magic dream?" - asking question out loud while memories coming back, dream details being live in his head, wolfs that he created. But it's not about that. It's a size of a tree house- it was large, suddenly, he wanted to know why. Rhythm Bee patiently replied:

Loneliness and sadness was big as size of every room,
perception of life was every mushroom.
Egg is something new about to happen, so that you know.
Everything you felt, saw or hear was real. Are you ready to believe?

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Teresa Seia
It's great to see how you incorporated the notion of relative proportion into Ivy's story, making his character grow emotionally and become more able to adapt to different situations and environments...
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Child of Nature
@Teresa Seia Thank you, that's the point of the whole series of stories! Glad and kind of proud You could recognize that, thank you once again! 🤟
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Juli.carmen
Very nice I have interesting story full of feelings and emotions.
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Dewaputra
And so the story continues. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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Child of Nature
@Dewaputra Thank you so much for the support and reading it, really hope you'll continue enjoying them 😊🧡
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Niria
Very beautiful your story has many mixed feelings thank you for sharing it
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Zulaine Díaz
Nice story with a very detailed description, I loved it.
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torres.anthonny
Good comic strip, entertained me and kept reading so I must say it's pretty good.
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Child of Nature
@torres.anthonny Well, not exactly a comic book, but thank for reading 😊
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Maria
seems like a good story, I'm sure I'll read the next part, thanks for sharing it
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Ruth@dri
I like these kinds of stories, you get lost in the description of every detail. I hope one day I can write like this 🥺
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Child of Nature
@Creaciones Chik's Practice to follow your idea in creative process :D go ahead courageously! 🤟
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willbelysy
At first I thought it was a relfessive text, now I notice that it is a nice story that leaves us a good lesson
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Rosita&Charlene-Blogs-Creaties
Your writing style is very beautiful and nice to read. I also enjoyed reading this
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Child of Nature
@mama-rosita Hope to continue reading and enjoying. Have the best day 🤟
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MAGALY
I'm following your story, how great that you share it, I love it.
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Child of Nature
@MAGALY thank you for those words and kindness 😊
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Animal lover
How nice did you write this I enjoyed it?
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Child of Nature
@Animal lover Yes, I wrote those. It's a series of stories about the boy, and this is No.4 story for now. Next one in Wednesday :)
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Yoors Daily
I liked reading this, you have a lovely writting style.
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Child of Nature
@Daily thank you for kind and nice comment, means a lot to me ❤️
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