Judith bedreigt Ellen (183) | Flying Eagle

Judith bedreigt Ellen (183)

319 · 2 min read · 22 Jan 2022 · 31 · 16 · 21

… bedreigd op de manier …

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Vervolgverhaal Kalle en Pietje, deel 183

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De volgende dag moet Ellen toch diep in het stof bijten voor Judith. Ze wordt bedreigd op de manier zoals Judith dat vaker laat zien. Met de nodige bluf en groot vertoon van macht.

Ellen gaat voor haar op de knieën en buigt. Daarop zet Judith haar voet op Ellens nek en verklaart haar in bezit te nemen.

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21 comments

141woorden

What a special story you know how to make of it, you keep your readers trapped in the web of your characters heads, so handsome!

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Flying Eagle

@140woorden , thank you. ☺

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Alfred

Thank you very much first of all for publishing the story, I felt trapped by the story and how it unfolds and knowing she was left in that situation I will share her story to reach more people

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Flying Eagle

@Alfred , thank you for sharing

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rockstar

is your story very special, I wait closely for the outcome and that Ellen defends herself and can break free

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Flying Eagle

Just wait a while and see, @rockstar! ☺

marijke

that's how it works everyone looks the other way and Ellen has to tell Judith that she will obey.

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Dana

Have read your story with great interest again. You suck me up in the brain. Very special.

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Rosita&Charlene-Blogs-Creaties

I think this is going to be even more exciting. Can't wait for the next part, namely. I look forward to it

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naf1971naf

A real ordeal for what happened Elles I hope things will improve and from a forum history @Flying Eagle

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roxana_ac

Oh wow nice story, it seems like this Judith it's a bit rude, I hope Ellen be okay soon 😓

Daniel

The story of Judith, you will create a story with many parts? It is that you aroused my curiosity with the story of wanting to know more

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Flying Eagle

@Daniel , I'm still writing. And indeed, I am already in a large number of parts. It also writes nicely, with the 140 words per episode.
Judith, incidentally, has only a supporting. The main roles are for Pietje and Kalle. Ellen is the latest supporting actor.

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mlourdesbermudez

mlourdesbermudez

Hello good day. Greetings. Just like that judith who is trapped? Who caught her? We must read the next part.

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Dewaputra

What a horrible 'lady' Judith says. Hopefully it will take a different turn soon and it still works out well for Ellen.

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Flying Eagle

@Dewaputra , let's hope so.! But you know what Pietje had to go through with her.

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Alberto

This story is very mysterious, I feel that I must read the next part to understand why she is in that situation

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Flying Eagle

@Alberto , in the next few parts, we look even further at Ellen's situation.

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Freli

I am struck by the fact that because she is trapped, it seems to me to be a curious story to read, good day for you

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Marc

What kind of a little bit is that Judith, I never really want to meet that?.

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Flying Eagle

@Marc De Bisschop , she's trapped there for a reason.

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