Mijmeringen over de straf (56)

310 · 2 min read · 06 Dec 2020 · 19 · 6 · 8

… hoe lang zal zij dat volhouden …

Deze straf is passend

Vervolgverhaal Kalle en Pietje, deel 56

Pietje krijgt deze Alpha-avond natuurlijk niet mee. Zij moet wachten tot Kalle binnenkort verslag uit komt brengen. Ze denkt terug aan haar jeugd en hoe ze toen eigenlijk ook al gevangen gehouden werd in negativiteit. Door die gedachten verduistert haar levenslust.

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Rudy Siedlecki 🌳

3 years ago

I read that this month is the key word in the 140 words 'angel hair'. This sequel is well written, nothing wrong with it, but I don't see angel hair.

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Flying Eagle

3 years ago

@Rudy Siedlecki 🌳 1st paragraph: (br) scary (n), 3rd paragraph (convicted) len, and 'her' is in it several times. ☺

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Nedixson Aguirre

3 years ago

good story, it would be great if I developed it as part of a novel or story, it seemed to me that I get a lot of attention

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Flying Eagle

3 years ago

@Nedixson Aguirre , this is part 56 of my follow-up story. Now - 1 year later - there are already more than 160 parts. So this is clearly part of a bigger story.

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