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Vervolgverhaal Kalle en Pietje, deel 56
Pietje krijgt deze Alpha-avond natuurlijk niet mee. Zij moet wachten tot Kalle binnenkort verslag uit komt brengen. Ze denkt terug aan haar jeugd en hoe ze toen eigenlijk ook al gevangen gehouden werd in negativiteit. Door die gedachten verduistert haar levenslust.
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I read that this month is the key word in the 140 words 'angel hair'. This sequel is well written, nothing wrong with it, but I don't see angel hair.
@Rudy Siedlecki 🌳 1st paragraph: (br) scary (n), 3rd paragraph (convicted) len, and 'her' is in it several times. ☺
good story, it would be great if I developed it as part of a novel or story, it seemed to me that I get a lot of attention
@Nedixson Aguirre , this is part 56 of my follow-up story. Now - 1 year later - there are already more than 160 parts. So this is clearly part of a bigger story.
a story that you doubt to clear, many unknowns for Pietje, interesting plot @Flying Eagle
Mmm how interesting this museum is how history can have gloomy things and to understand various things that happen in it
Uh, I think it's a really interesting story, it's very well written and complete. Thank you for sharing the information with us.
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