Your words take me to an enchanting place full of love and beauty, where days are spent walking on Morocco's sandy beaches and nights of passion and tenderness take place on the stone roofs of houses that look like beehives, while the fresh night breeze blows from the desert.
Beautiful poem!
Thanks for sharing.
This poem is truly captivating. The imagery and emotions evoked through the words create a vivid and engaging experience for the reader. I appreciate the way the poet intertwines themes of time, youth, desire, and the beauty of nature. The verses paint a... Show moreThis poem is truly captivating. The imagery and emotions evoked through the words create a vivid and engaging experience for the reader. I appreciate the way the poet intertwines themes of time, youth, desire, and the beauty of nature. The verses paint a picture of passion, tenderness, and longing, set against the backdrop of Morocco's sand dunes and stone roofs. It's a wonderful piece that transports the reader to a world of emotions and sensations. Thank you for sharing this remarkable poem.
They keep offering me yp to comment on this beautiful poem that I have already commented on. I take advantage of the opportunity and I repeat that your lyrics are always well constructed and very pleasant.
Beautiful images and emotions that you show and feel in your... Show moreBeautiful images and emotions that you show and feel in your poem.
You are intertwined in a sorrow of losing your loved one. It's hard to get rid of this.
It must have been like a fairytale relationship for you. Full of passion and tenderness
You crave it. That's why your poems are sad at the same time. But also happy because of the beautiful images you draw.
The poem you shared evokes different images and emotions. It seems to be a combination of longing, memories, and intense experiences. The descriptions of time, illusion, love and landscapes create an atmosphere of enchantment and emotion. The last lines... Show moreThe poem you shared evokes different images and emotions. It seems to be a combination of longing, memories, and intense experiences. The descriptions of time, illusion, love and landscapes create an atmosphere of enchantment and emotion. The last lines suggest a romantic setting in Morocco, with walks on the sand, passion and tenderness. Overall, the poem evokes a sense of intensity and poetic imagination.
The sands of time and meanders of memory are inextricably woven in your lttle stories in such an evocative way. You tell without showing too much and leave the rest to what these words awaken in our own imagination. ( I really should follow my connections more.) Thanks for sharing!
With your poems, you always evoke beautiful images and emotions that range from melancholy to intense happiness. They are dreams of the past. That past that you must have and that you really long for
First of all I want to tell you that you have written another beautiful poem here. Here's what I gather from it, but please correct me if I'm wrong: you long for her. Her words, her touches, her body. A desire that is fed by time. A longing that has been... Show moreFirst of all I want to tell you that you have written another beautiful poem here. Here's what I gather from it, but please correct me if I'm wrong: you long for her. Her words, her touches, her body. A desire that is fed by time. A longing that has been going on for a long time, but for some reason you hoped or thought it would pass, that it was just a phase. On the one hand you try to hide your feelings from her but on the other hand you want her to know and you hope that your words reach her to the depths of her heart. You distance yourself out of fear but the real question is why? What exactly scares you so much? Being rejected or the fact that she might feel the same way you do? I also read that you wait for her to take a step towards you but what if she does too, waiting for a step from you? But who knows, maybe I'm interpreting it all wrong 🤷♀️
@Dierenwelzijn Thank you for time and effort you put into this. But yes, you got these verses correctly. It is great to know that reader received my emotion.
Wow, what a beautifully written text. This requires almost no pictures, they will come to mind. Although I must confess that I was originally a strong image thinker. Adding a picture to take me just a little bit more into the text would be more helpful for me. Anyway, that is of course a personal thing.
You wrote another beautiful poem, full of imagery and nice words. It seems like a wonderful time, there in Morocco. I can see all the scenery of Marrakech or something like that, a fairy tale.
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Beautiful poem!
Thanks for sharing.
You are intertwined in a sorrow of losing your loved one. It's hard to get rid of this.
It must have been like a fairytale relationship for you. Full of passion and tenderness
You crave it. That's why your poems are sad at the same time. But also happy because of the beautiful images you draw.