Muses on the punishment (56)

310 · 2 min read · 06 Dec 2020 · 19 · 6 · 8

... how long will she last...

This penalty is appropriate

Follow-up story Kalle en Pietje, part 56

Pietje does not get this Alpha evening. She's gonna have to wait for Kalle to report soon. She thinks back to her childhood and how she was already held prisoner in negativity. Through those thoughts, her zest for life is obscuring.

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Rudy Siedlecki 🌳

3 years ago

I read that this month is the key word in the 140 words 'angel hair'. This sequel is well written, nothing wrong with it, but I don't see angel hair.

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Flying Eagle

3 years ago

@Rudy Siedlecki 🌳 1st paragraph: (br) scary (n), 3rd paragraph (convicted) len, and 'her' is in it several times. ☺

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Nedixson Aguirre

3 years ago

good story, it would be great if I developed it as part of a novel or story, it seemed to me that I get a lot of attention

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Flying Eagle

3 years ago

@Nedixson Aguirre , this is part 56 of my follow-up story. Now - 1 year later - there are already more than 160 parts. So this is clearly part of a bigger story.

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