-New Beginning
Hi everyone, I'm not exactly new here, I've been a member for a while, but this is my first post! Before school I had to write a short (800 words) story and I would like to share it here.
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Noëlle Blisx was born into a family that has been fighting against injustice and crime in the world for generations. Misery caused by the depraved family of Dajou. Until she became pregnant at a young age and quite unexpectedly, this was also her destiny. Suddenly Noëlle realized that the future of her unborn child was already fixed by then. She decided to break with tradition and raise her daughter under a different name, without the burden that her family has been carrying for so long. However, this decision allowed her to stand alone. Her parents could not accept this break with tradition, and strangely enough, her young friend Luke also left her for this reason. Seventeen years passed in which Noëlle and Eliza, her daughter, were not always easy, but managed to save themselves well. Eliza was on the train, but every time she thought back to the phone call with Isabella Blisx, in which she talked about a data leak of deadly information. When the train arrived, she walked into the inconspicuous building of the Blisx. There she looked around and saw a lot of security guards standing there. Immediately a man and woman came to her. The woman looked like her mother like two drops of water. They introduced themselves as Isabella and Mick Blisx. For the first time, she's getting acquainted with her grandfather and grandmother. Because it was late in the day, they gave Eliza a short tour and then went straight to sleep. The next day Eliza received an extensive tour of the building. There were a lot of rooms with laptops, but few staff. Between the tour, Isabella and Mick explained things as well. For example, there were few staff because it was an exclusive family business and the security guards were there to keep everything secret. But two things they said kept haunting through her head. The Blisx family was her biological home, and her father, Luke Dagou, was their enemy. Isabella and Mick took her to the main room. There were a lot of laptops on the table, many of which display reports of the amount of data that was stolen and then made public. Isabella said it was Luke, but Mick didn't think so, because he was thinking about the Russians before. After the tour of the building, they went to relax in the twelfth room, where they had not been during the tour. The twelfth room was Mick's workspace, where his self-programmed video games were located. Isabella walked out of the room and Eliza and Mick went to play a game. After an hour of play, Isabella came back into the room. She had an old book with her that contained the history of the family. What Eliza noticed was that the pages darkened from 1890. Isabella said that when the battle with the Dagou family began. It started in 1850 with a small family quarrel, but soon the Dajous got big plans. Plans to destroy the world. Isabella concluded with an announcement that they therefore needed their daughter, Eliza's mother. Only she could identify the perpetrator of the data theft, because she was the only one who had ever seen him. Eliza was heading towards the main room to call her mother. She explained briefly that the world was in danger, probably by Luke Dagou. Noëlle wouldn't listen at first, but when she found out the killer was Luke, she wanted to hear more about it. She hung up to think and soon got a feeling of guilt. After all, she was the one who had a relationship with him and thus let him into the family. She grabbed her bag, drove towards the station and got on the train. For the first time in a long time again towards the Blisx. On the early morning, Noëlle walked in as if she had never left. She walked towards the headroom and cried out that it was time to save the world. A few minutes later, Eliza, Mick and Isabella arrived and showed all the data to Noëlle. She went straight to I.D. and soon she found him. Isabella was right, it was Luke. He was in an abandoned warehouse in district 0. Noëlle insisted that she had to solve it alone, but Eliza thought it was too dangerous and demanded to do it together. They walked into the abandoned warehouse, but there was nothing. Except in the middle, there was one laptop on a rickety table. As they walked cautiously, Luke walked up from nowhere and grabbed Eliza from behind. He pulled out a gun and held it to her head. Before he could hurt Eliza, Noëlle also grabbed a gun and shot Luke.
