Hope and Fingerprint

Let's Beguin with the First story of my New World Challenge. The story is about an orphaned twelve yare old girl named Hope and her meeting with the blind dog she named Fingerprint. I set an intention to write a background of New World characters and after make a storyline into a fantasy book. In conclusion, this is a preview of and characters' past lives and background before they meet in "now" to team up and solve the puzzle of their existence.

No identity orphaned child - Hope

No one knew where's she from, she just showed up on a staircase at night when panic ruled the st. Patric Orphanage. While the sisters tried to get out safely with other children because the fire burst on the west part of the building, sister Elvira found a child wrapped up in a white blanket with golden binding, simple letter H. As she took a child from cold stairs and looked into brown intelligent eyes thinking there was something about this child that woke up hope in her heart.

"Come here, you beautiful, I wonder what happened to you?" A few days after the fire, nuns try to find out any information about the girl or her origin, but their search was unfortunate - no one in the little village did not know where the child came from, what's her name or how she end up there that night when hell brake loose on their orphanage because of the bad and old electric installations. So she had a nickname that stick around for twelve years, Hope. And her personality was exactly that, she was a dreamer in a hopeless place, always in trouble and in misbehave, if you ask the nuns, especially the headmaster's sister Elvira, she was imposible free child, not accepting the teachings they zeausly tryed to teach her. She was wild, always ruing trough hols and laughing to loud. She was more of a boy hat a girl, bt had beauty that small amount of women had - her hear curly and wild as her is, withe teeths like perls and personality of flower born onece in a lfetime. aldough she was the youngest girl there, she was the wisest one and other girls always came to her when troble occurd and she gladly took the fall for the one he loved and think of like sisters - Lidia (15), Masa (14) and Jana(13). Hope had that difiance in brown deep eyes that could confront devile it self, just becouse she was so sure in Love. That child knew Love can defeat and concare, destroy any power that stands in her way. That one time when Masa swimed in ocean, Elvira was so mad becouse swiming was strictly prohibided, she took the beeting becouse she knew Masa is to sensitive. She simply took the blame, laying it was her idea, aldough she was hangig from the tree, not knowing where her sister by heart is. Lidia was unsecure one, and two girls conected that day after Hope took the punishment. Maša was so eaen by the blame for not saing the truth about the boy she followed in ocean, blaming herself for cowardice. That day Maša and Hope were in pain together, one sheading tears for other and the other had bloodi bach from relentless blow she take for her sister. Lidia spend night in bed with Hope gently singig, cuteling and simply loving the bouth. Jana was on the side that night, sleepig becouse she did not know what to do. That's the night they become sisterhood of Love, unbrakable love. So much love, Hope comfort Lidia teling her she would do it again for any of them.

Magic within the girl - Fingerprint

Hope always loved her orphanage, especially working in the garden. She loved to help nun Rahela weed the grass from the tomatoes or eaing tomatoes directly from the plant. Her favorite activity was wake dreaming - she could play wither self-imagination in different worlds, but simply sit underneath the oak tree and dream about art. She could smell her art studio, and feel it in her bones. She wanted to be an artist so bad. On one occasion when nun Elvira asked what she is drawing, Hope simply said future. They mostly laughed at her serious answers, but no one gets it seriously until the day blind dog chooses her as it master. She woke up from daydream and watched the magic unfold before her eyes - oak tree for a moment become alive crafting a dog from mud and leaves and acorns. For a moment she thought it was a lie, but it was not because the dog chooses to be blind and a live, her friend forever and ever. White semi-long fluff and big, she just wanted to play with it, but felt like it's not a game. It's the reason why she's here. He asked bout it's name but did not speak at all, telepathic communication with a dog was not so strange for her. "There must be stranger things in this world!" she thought, but the dog said there's little time before Elvira finds out. "Tell me my name girl and go before it's too late" - said The dog to her. The girl did not understand why, looking t her hands and fingers, still just wanting to play, observing her fingerprints. "Fingerprint is your name" - said her whispering the sentance. Hope heard laughter, deep joyful laughter, that one when occurs when cognition occurs, like lightning inside the storm, laughed so resonant she starts to laugh with it. Hope lay down and listen to the story, a riddle of her origins, in her head.

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I think this is going to be a great story. If all the characters are going to be like Hope and Fingerprint I can't wait to see what they're going to do together
I think it's a very interesting story @Child of Nature , hope have a noble, indomitable, supportive spirit that will give a lot of material to build an attractive and real story that will please young and old
Interesting topic and I already love the character child Hope. I'm sure to follow the sequel of your book, which started very well with outlining the characters that play along with it.
I love Hope and I find it interesting the way you present your characters before the story starts. I will surely follow your progress in the story.
A very moving story for me to read it, thank God you always put angels on the way to guide us. Good public
a great writing a very precise way of emitting a feeling and very important language that fits very well with the story congratulations
Very good story told part of the heart to read that a child is left alone in this world without a row is something for those who live it
it is unfortunate this story is reflected in many real children is a story that touches the souls of many
a great story the way you describe the little one and all the details of more people or characters
IS A VERY NICE AND VERY WELL WRITTEN STORY CONGRATULATIONS FOR YOUR GREAT WORK EXPOSING THE FEELINGS AND THE SIMPLICITY OF A GIRL
She was fortunate to find her, she found a place where there was protection, too bad they did not find information about her origin
is a great story of love for life despite being in a small orphanage that little girl was never discouraged
As I read this, this is going to be very promising to read the other part. Super well written.
Very touching story of this girl, but we always run into people who help us, although she must look for the meaning of her name
I love the shape of this melancholy and very sad story but without losing that essence that is only reflected in a hope, hope of life
This story is very good to begin with congratulations friend I wish you all the best in this new world of stories that you start with hope
Oh friend you write very well I congratulate you I stop you have many gifts I see in the girl hope something about you
it is a beautiful story I loved a lot of hope is a girl wow indescribable she has a huge heart only those hearts leave their mark
The first part is very promising to say the least. Fingerprint, that is a rather unusual name to give to a dog. Unusual and magical at the same time.
@Dewaputra thank you for being y firdt reader:) and for kind comment OFC