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@lcma · 04 Jun 2021
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The Dutch boy

#shortstory This story happened many years ago.
Once two brothers played near a dam that served to separate the great sea from the village while all the men worked and the mothers stayed in their homes, these children moved away from the village and played among them one of them noticed that a little water flowed from the great wall, aware that that drop of water could knock down the dam and flood the whole town I place his little finger in the slit preventing the passage of water.
His brother ran to warn the elders of the catastrophe that could come while his brother kept his finger in the crack.
Hours went by and his body began to feel tired of being in that position and the water crackled and creaking threatening his whole future every time the water pushed harder and came out a little more the boy seemed to lose the battle, when he no longer had strength left in the distance he saw his little brother come with all the men returning from the distance. work carrying the tools to cure the crack.
The boy was recognized as a hero.
Story based on the legend of Hans Brinker


Photo: Pixabay

  • Comments (22)
Juli.carmen
Good story not heard before thank you for sharing
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Teresa Seia
It's nice that you took a legend and wrote it in your own terms using different details. Also, thanks to you, now I searched on the Internet and learned a bit about Hans Brinker and about the origin of his story :)
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LCMA
@Teresa Seia Hello thank you for the support that bue or that you liked
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Sela
Nice story we can create things based on someone's experience that is worth remembering
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JdD
Hello greetings, good story
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LCMA
@JdD Greetings that good you liked thank you for the support
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LuisXV
Hello greetings, I am new here very good story based on real events I congratulate you
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leninJM
I've ever read about this legend I think the boy was made a statue and everything.
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naiiu
I touch him to carry a big responsibility on his shoulders, nice story so they must always be
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sofibrav
Nice story and beautiful but beautiful photography
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rosarr
It is a story that children would love to know because in their fragility and innocence they can save many lives only with their resistance
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