"One-liner challenge on Yoors" as I like to call it, started a few days ago with @Henkjan de Krijger asking all members of Yoors What's your personal one-liner? Frankly, I did read just a headline of your post that day and reacted simultaneously in the comments. Watched the video (and read a post) after. This post is kind of about that comment since now I know and am aware of the rules (haha for those entertained by my clumsiness) so there goes the hashtag: #yoorsoneliner  
Now, when we are done with technicalities, let me just recommend very good peace on this subject The one-liner (well, two-liners) challenge! Thank you once again @Adriana because You really did help me in a practical way while working on mine.

LOOK AT THE PLANET EARTH, HUMAN!

Look at Your Mother, Human, look with Your true eyes,
Before taking your next act, ask Your self, "Is it worthwhile?"
Futures tied so closely, we're in desperate need of symbiosis.

If You think these verses lie, that's a stop sign,
take a look in the mirror's eyes as the sun set's to rise
accept how closely connected we all are.

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Meily
excellent post daughter of nature I hope it reaches many people and we can make those changes that the earth needs
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Sela
we're part of something bigger than us with our grain of sand we're going to build it
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Chela
beautiful post we all leave something no sigh is in vain
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LuisXV
by reformulating our very existence we can go as far as we want and even change our destiny
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Maria
very much according to your line always in favor of nature and its species, and if... we should make it more human
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LCMA
loving us is important hills wise and powerful words friend
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Rudy Siedlecki 🌳
The problem is overcrowding.. 250,000 people join every day.
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Sharon
cute way to see life is a great esperitu
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eddy
very good words the future is ours we have to defend our future
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Juli.carmen
If each of us tried to see life in a better way.giving it the importance of our planet and its conservation. We would be able to unite and be part of that salvation and not destruction.
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leid
we are part of a whole as these microorganisms one depends on the existence of the other so an order is maintained
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Nani
is a very interesting topic but at the same time you always reach that point of saving the planet seems extremist
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naiiu
very true friend only we can build it and we are taking it astray
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Mrc
I think the future is in children and educating them will save the planet
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Dtorr
I think we are in the future of our ancestors and that is why we pay the consequences
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rosarr
I don't think we don't have to worry about the future rather than the present
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sofibrav
interesting line thinking about the future is paramount especially when it comes to human nature
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Ari
very well they say we own our own destiny we create it and destroy it
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ellesvandenbroek
I do not really see the one-liner as shown in the video of @henkjandekrijger . Like: 1 a problem of the reader - 2 your solution to it - 3 the win for your reader. I love the poem anyways!
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Child of Nature
@ellesvandenbroek As long as I know me, I do not do rules so well or uniformity.This is me being out off the box thinker in finding good, creative and true (one-liner solution in this case) for my project. Read the poem again and let the each part explain you the questions 💚
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Dewaputra
I support your approach and the way you look at it.
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Teresa Seia
This is consistent with your approach to life 😍
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