This story was, naturally, made by me;


Sérgio pushed his black hair out of his eyes so he could look at the sea. He was a small, vain man. Any little event was a reason to dress carefully. Like today: he only had come to the beach to admire the sea, and was certain he would see nobody. He really prefer it that way. That calm feeling, looking at the immense sparkling blue, needed no company. Sérgio looked around and noticed that the three families that were playing on the beach, had already been reduced to one. Even this last family was packing up to leave while laughing satisfied. From now on, the beach would be for himself. Sérgio moved forward slightly, almost touching the beginning of the water and bent down to take off his shoes. He stood still for a moment, feeling the cold water touching his bare feet.

Suddenly a cold hand grabbed his ankle. He looked astonished at the large man rising in front of him: the water was gathering together forming a robust, huge man, with the blond hair dripping. Sérgio´s astonishment turned into shock. He turned and started to run, but was immediately thrown to the ground with violence.

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You made it sound so frightening...let's see what happens next :)
@Teresa Seia just you wait! I don´t know yet😉
A peaceful beginning, a violent ending.
At first I saw myself walking at a Portugese beach, but at the end I don't want to be there ! No body switch for me !
Confieso que a mí me da miedo la playa. Es linda en fotografía pero cuando me meto al mar siento que algo me va a llevar 😂
@Meredith Skywalker Haha! You are afraid of the killer 😉
The horror story no the beach. In My city is very common
sorry I can't read him no translation button.
definitivamente lo pensaré 2 veces antes de ir nuevamente a la playa, sra Paula
When I was a child I was bathed in the sea, I thought they would grab my feet
Por momentos me puse en la piel de Sergio, excelente...!
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Muy buena historia, en realidad me sentí abrumado y en suspenso.
Ooh... a fight for life...
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pobre sergio, ante tal magnitud de ser, creo que paso un buen susto!!
@pitamaria2000 And, on top of that, died!😉
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Wow, a very original, creative and surprising story!