@Teresa Seia The words of your poem are simple but full of love for life, sometimes in life we miss the smallest things but full of love, all things that make us understand how beautiful it is to live, sometimes people run, run, run fast towards those who... Show more@Teresa Seia The words of your poem are simple but full of love for life, sometimes in life we miss the smallest things but full of love, all things that make us understand how beautiful it is to live, sometimes people run, run, run fast towards those who know what goals, what you have described with this poem is to go slowly, enjoy the things we have every day at hand to discover that happiness is always at hand is only a matter of heart
Last line was very impressive. It shows the fluidity of moments passing onto each other that touched me. This poem speaks of how much wonder is life if we look closely and be present in now. This is one of the way to make life more fun. Beautifully described... Show moreLast line was very impressive. It shows the fluidity of moments passing onto each other that touched me. This poem speaks of how much wonder is life if we look closely and be present in now. This is one of the way to make life more fun. Beautifully described moments and jumping from one scene to other is great.
Waking up, kitchen to garden, to strangers showing all the wonders and love. Worth every word. Keep writing and sharing. I liked this poem very much.
@Just read(en) Thank you so much for this beautiful comment! So kind you took the time to do such a detailed analysis! I'll try my best to keep writing...
Waking up, kitchen to garden, to strangers showing all the wonders and love. Worth every word. Keep writing and sharing. I liked this poem very much.