First things matter

If you wake up before the sun

You may see the inside of the morning

The way trees are looking at you

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@Teresa Seia The words of your poem are simple but full of love for life, sometimes in life we miss the smallest things but full of love, all things that make us understand how beautiful it is to live, sometimes people run, run, run fast towards those who... Show more
@w.festuccia Indeed, love, in its many forms, is a driving force of our existence. Thank you for your appreciation of the poem!
Really beautifully written!
@Mónica Thank you 😄 It's great you liked it!
Last line was very impressive. It shows the fluidity of moments passing onto each other that touched me. This poem speaks of how much wonder is life if we look closely and be present in now. This is one of the way to make life more fun. Beautifully described... Show more
@Just read(en) Thank you so much for this beautiful comment! So kind you took the time to do such a detailed analysis! I'll try my best to keep writing...
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How very beautifully witten. 'Last things always disappear in first things' everlasting sphere' when you induge in the moment of the now.
@Dewaputra I hadn't thought of it that way. It does add a profound perspective, thank you! I'm very happy you liked my poem.