@Mónica Thank you so much, Mónica! I've since corrected a typo ("leave" instead of "leaf") so now your daughter can read it free from mistakes. So happy you'd think of sharing it with her 🙂
A palace made for eight tiny feets. Thats the line i liked most. Don't know why it pulled me... Show moreA palace made for eight tiny feets. Thats the line i liked most. Don't know why it pulled me in.
I spy i spy
From my corner of my eye
A yoors friend weaving
Of the finest ink
Heart touching
About spiders
A lovely poem.
Just a try on your theme. I think in second stanza
But a leave will stick
Is it leaf?
I think thats only thing i found little bit off. Neither the poem was absolutely beautiful. Keep writing and sharing. Love from justread
@Just read(en) Sorry I missed this lovely comment from you! I am really glad you liked it and thank you so much for pointing out the issue with "leave", indeed it was a typo when I wrote it. It was supposed to read "leaf". Corrected now 🙂
I spy i spy
From my corner of my eye
A yoors friend weaving
Of the finest ink
Heart touching
About spiders
A lovely poem.
Just a try on your theme. I think in second stanza
But a leave will stick
Is it leaf?
I think thats only thing i found little bit off. Neither the poem was absolutely beautiful. Keep writing and sharing. Love from justread