Wat is tijd? - Yoors

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vanrupstotvlinder

@vanrupstotvlinder · 15 Feb 2018

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Wat is tijd?

#tijd #gedicht #verlies #rouw #omgaanmetverliesenrouw

Denk jij weleens na over tijd? Tijd is slechts een begrip, het gaat zo snel voorbij de tijd. Je staat niet altijd stil bij hoe snel de seconden, de minuten, de uren of zelfs de dagen verstrijken. Dit gedicht heb ik geschreven voor een opdracht voor de module rituelen voor de opleiding verlies-, rouw- en stervensbegeleiding. In dit gedicht vraag ik juist aandacht om stil te staan bij de tijd, stil te staan bij de belangrijkste tijd in je leven, het moment van afscheid. Juist na een afscheid hebben we vaak nog behoefte aan tijd. Dit gedicht gaat over het laatste uur dat we samen zijn voordat het echte afscheid is van onze dierbare. Het moment dat we al met elkander bij die ene dierbare om de kist heen staan. Dat laatste uurtje waarin je nog een laatste keer alles kan zeggen, delen of wat dan ook.

Wat heeft dit gedicht jou allemaal te zeggen? Laat je het me weten in de reacties?

En voor iedereen die de tekst niet in het Nederlands kan lezen, ook een vertaling in het Engels, mogelijk niet geheel op juiste wijze vertaald, maar om een idee te geven:

Time

A whole life,
in which time is given to each.
Too little time in the end
it felt like a losing battle.
Then a special hour what came as opportune,
got a special time.
Once more all together,
before we can let you go for good.
An hour of wonder
heard and saw everything with admiration.
From a distance you watched in silence,
thinking where am i going?
Then a void that dominates,
everyone feels controlled.
An hour of creativity
you feel the effectiveness.
The hour has done its work,
the question can we go on now?
Finally the way home,
designing a new future.

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naf1971naf

how nice to know the meaning of your poem, you know @vanrupstotvlinder reading it came to mind my experience with the death of my father, he died in the hospital in the company of a niece and mine, I think there is a concept that must go hand in hand with... Show more how nice to know the meaning of your poem, you know @vanrupstotvlinder reading it came to mind my experience with the death of my father, he died in the hospital in the company of a niece and mine, I think there is a concept that must go hand in hand with time is awareness, many live awake asleep and when it comes to realizing this valuable time has passed that was not used, that is what I lived with the death of my uncle, I saw what consumed my mother the care she had with him during her suffering, I did not want to reissue that with my father, I think I lived every moment with him in life until his physical farewell, spiritually he is always with me

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vanrupstotvlinder

vanrupstotvlinder

@naf1971naf yes, that is what time is all about. Choose how you want to spend the time. Time is over before you know it, and then there is just the last hour with your loved one.

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Buena Música

What a great truth is there in this poem that you have shared with us today, sometimes we need a lot of time to try to forget about a significant loss of a loved one

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vanrupstotvlinder

vanrupstotvlinder

@Buena Música thank you for your comment.

Néstor David

The time has different concepts of different people can give it, you can mold it very good the publication friend shocking and makes us question

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vanrupstotvlinder

vanrupstotvlinder

@Néstor David thank you, that makes this a good publication.

fanny

As I said, time is a good teacher, he teaches us and makes us see reality _

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vanrupstotvlinder

vanrupstotvlinder

@fanny yes true indeed.

Alfred

What better than waking up in the morning and visualizing a work of beautiful words, I was fascinated by its publication, I exist for you

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vanrupstotvlinder

vanrupstotvlinder

@Alfred thank you.

kevinbacca92

Time is something ephemeral, intangible, but existing, it always accompanies us, even if we don't think about it in a way of reflection. Thank you

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vanrupstotvlinder

vanrupstotvlinder

@kevinbacca92 yes true indeed.

Alberto

Reflecting with the publication I started to think if time is that which puts everything in order As the fundamental piece of our entire existence, good work

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vanrupstotvlinder

vanrupstotvlinder

@Alberto thank you.

Marc

That is the great thing about the concept of 'time', that everyone feels, uses or sees it in their own realistic world.

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vanrupstotvlinder

vanrupstotvlinder

@Marc pulses. And precisely in a training for loss, grief and death counseling, you learn that even more. Time then becomes only a household name. Because what is still time? From that in mind, I wrote this too. It's about the last hour we're together... Show more @Marc pulses. And precisely in a training for loss, grief and death counseling, you learn that even more. Time then becomes only a household name. Because what is still time? From that in mind, I wrote this too. It's about the last hour we're together before the real farewell to our loved one. The moment that we are around the box with each other at that one loved one. That last hour where you can say everything, share or whatever one last time.

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Daniel

Excellent, your vision that time is very accurate, you are a very talented woman who knows how to give excellent publications

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vanrupstotvlinder

vanrupstotvlinder

@Daniel thank you.

Freli

It is a publication that is year old, it is still very important to read it I love how you let see. Your beautiful words

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vanrupstotvlinder

vanrupstotvlinder

@Freli thank you, I really wanted to share this post when I saw the challenge time. It is still something that is helpfull.

Schorelaar

Een mooie tekst, nodigt uit om herinneringen te delen.

vanrupstotvlinder

vanrupstotvlinder

Dat was mijn intentie van de tekst, doel behaald dus.

Je weet wel...Karin!

Je weet wel...Karin!

Vol gevoel, mooi en een chapeau dus

vanrupstotvlinder

vanrupstotvlinder

Dankjewel Karin van der Straaten.

Vicky

Wat een mooie tekst

vanrupstotvlinder

vanrupstotvlinder

Dankjewel Vicky.

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