Yoors

Text and images match fine!

Chalija

Eleven nicely written with nice illustrations. Go on.

jose07610

a nice story accompanied by very colorful illustrations. Good work

Sadaf W.

Great content. Thanks for sharing this with us. Keep sharing and blogging.

GMVDMinimalism

I like it better to look at the drawings and let my own imagination go :-).

Diego G.O.

A pleasant story accompanied by beautiful drawings, magically phenomenal 👍

zulusys21

Very good post very nice accompanied by those beautiful illustrations

Alberto

The illustrations are very good you have that pisca of magic

vanrupstotvlinder

What a lovely story and beautiful illustrations that support the story.

Eza Chavez

What good illustrations, full of magic and color, congratulations

AstridTells

what a cute and strange story .... it is a rare beauty thanks for sharing <3

👑 Maru 👑

The story is very nice, and I find the drawings that accompany the story tender 😘

sameerbedar07

very much artistic approach relies in this rhyme very good

roxana_ac

Beautiful story, it's super sweet including the drawing, very cute

Ingeborgenzwerm

What a beautiful loving dreamy words to accompany the drawings.

Diana Lima

Very moving story, and the drawing is very cute 🌷

Thank you all for the YP hearts and the fun... Show moreThank you all for the YP hearts and the fun comment.
The little story is based on a myth that used to prevail among people. They then told you to stand in the middle of the witch circle of mushrooms and listen to the high vocal voices of the elves. Otherwise, you would be pulled further into the forest by an Evil force and get lost and you would never get home again.
I made it a bit more poetic.😉

Estrella

Beautiful writing, and beautiful drawings 😍 I loved them add an original touch to the work

Néstor David

Good story, every story with elves is beautiful 👍 long live magic!

Rudi

Very nicely written. A nice contribution to this 140 word pool.

Thanks to everyone for the positive comments. I always look at your 'brainstormed' texts.

enigma

Nice story, nice drawing too. Elves still capture the imagination.

@enigma

What an exciting story! It will happen to you, first your sister who turns into an elf and then you too.

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Zulaine Díaz

It's a beautiful story I'd like to read it to my nieces I think they're going to love it.

@Zulaine Díaz

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Maria

well written, very well narrated, with fantasy, wonderful content

bloguerouniversal

A micro tale full of fantasy! ideal for reading to the little ones at home.

@bloguerouniversal Yes, that's true. Also for children in the first studio who can't sit still. Like my little granddaughter Hannah. You'll never get them to a book. But the drawing is interesting and she wanted to listen to the short story. She liked it too. Thank you for your YP heart

ellesvandenbroek

I love the story and the drawing! Both from your own hands?

@ellesvandenbroek yes Elies I draw and paint from pupperty and writing, you know, I prefer to do. Thank you for your YP heart

Niria

Very nice story but I think it's a little short but cute reminds us of our childhood

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Arshi

reminds of my childhood

@Arshi Yes, it's rather short. But because of that, it remains a bitmysterious. But it's a bit poetic, huh?

qwertyuiop

Nicely written and made a beautiful illustration to the story! Or vice versa?

@The Creative Bumblebea I first wrote the text and the drawing to the content shaped.
Thanks for the nice response and the YP heart

Juli.carmen

It is a very exciting story to see how these images are captured in the story

@Juli.carmen thanks for your fun response and your HP heart

Gollo

Nice fairy tale good writing congratulate you good drawing.

Niyorlis

I liked your story, you have great creativity, although it is a little short the story is appreciated good writing.

@Niyorlis thanks for your heart. Yeah, I might have made 280 words better. But wanted to keep it at 140 for... Show more @Niyorlis thanks for your heart. Yeah, I might have made 280 words better. But wanted to keep it at 140 for once.
This is how it gets something mysterious and the insurmountable question? Will Annelies manage to save her little sister?. And then they both get back to their parents.? Or should they stay elves now?
Because they were transformed into their species by the elves for good?
And they don't let them go out of the woods anymore.

fanny

You made a nice story accompanied by beautiful drawing you stay super.

@fanny thanks for the compliment and YP heart

Alfred

It's a good story to tell you have a great and beautiful imagination.

Daniel

It's really a beautiful symphony of colors and at the same time a great story.

Freli

It's a beautiful story to tell the children and the drawing is very nice.

Leo 1

A fun children's story. Nice to present to the kids at the bottom of the Christmas tree later on Christmas.

A good story/story and a nice cover drawing

Rosita&Charlene-Blogs-Creaties

really a fairy tale I think it. Those drawings have worked out so well, I think.

Gustavo Perez

A nice fantasy adventure well written with good touches.

Rudy Siedlecki 🌳

For a moment I thought the drawings were a comic strip or 'find the seven differences'.

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Michell

It's a good story and cute drawings I'm curious to see how this story continues

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LeansixEnciso

Very good story and what a beautiful drawings, 😍 congratulations!!

Naturefreak

What a wonderful fairy tale with a beautiful drawing. I'm curious how it goes on.

Dewaputra

Nice contribution, a real fairy tale. The drawings you've made are beautiful,

Marc

Beautiful written fantasy story, although I don't understand what the hashtag witches will do in it, because it doesn't give this text 140, but 141 words.
Did you draw and paint those drawings yourself?

@Marc De Bisschop yes I signed it myself. Yes, those hachtags don't understand what they give as a result.
I will remove it

141woorden

A beautiful drawing, and fun, that matching story (I count 120 words, when you change it we'll take you into the 140 word review blog in November). (D)

@140woorden Thanks for the info. When the 4 days are over of what I logged in about the witch circle, I'm going to log in again. I extended the text to 140 words. I did have one on my PC. But I always tend to improve my own texts. I posted the last logins... Show more @140woorden Thanks for the info. When the 4 days are over of what I logged in about the witch circle, I'm going to log in again. I extended the text to 140 words. I did have one on my PC. But I always tend to improve my own texts. I posted the last logins on my smartphone. Because I still don't know how to get a photo on the PC with your text. I know that on my smartphone. But on the phone I can't see how many words I typed. Correction: I don't know how to see that.
Thank you for your nice response and your heart.
I'm going to promote everything again in the sequel. Because if you don't, you're like a needle in a haystack with your text, right? But I don't do it for the money anyway. I just love writing and really like Yoor's.