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j.o.h.a.n.d.e.r
· 07 Feb 2022
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INMORTALES

SINOPSIS : SOBRENATURAL.


Es la historia de Dave en joven huérfano que después de haber sufrido maltratos, abusos y muchas desgracias va una noche al lago y decide quitarse la vida lanzándose de un peñasco y al poco tiempo de abrir los ojos, piensa que está muerto, pero está flotando en el agua y junto a él un niño llamado Jack, quien al ver que no aprecia la vida le propone un desafío, encontrar el origen de la vida, antes de aceptar Dave el desafío, Jack toma una porción de su cabello, cuando abre su mano hay 7 cabellos y le advierte que tiene 7 días para encontrar el origen, porque cada vez que pase un día caerá un cabello a la tierra y algo le sucederá, el misterio es que Dave no puede morir antes que resuelva el desafío.

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Daniel
There will be more part of it? In my case I usually love supernatural stories very much have my support for their good publication
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Lety Zambrano Cartaya
It is perfect although a little short it is more than a story but beware it is very nice I support you friend
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Florencia Sendell
I liked the supernatural title is powerful hehe I congratulate you Johander I'll leave immediately to read the second part and I wait for the third
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Nimona Albelis
I liked to read it here in yoors there are good writers with good stories that I love so that I go to another blog if here in yoors I find everything
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Neider
Nice story. I had a lot of fun reading it. I'll read the second part. I congratulate you on your writing.
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RotsenAFM
Very good story friend I loved you have talents in those fingers when it comes to writing I congratulate you on it
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miradademujer36
This story is a little strong, there is one left wanting to know what will happen, then I will wait for it the next chapter
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Lui_jose
A very good topic for a story that I imagine will have more parts I stand excellent thanks for sharing what
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kevinbacca92
Interesting story I like to read books and I think this idea has a lot of potential to develop a very good story.
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Gilda O.
I think you can dedicate yourself to writing because I see you do it very well, you wrote something compelling enough in a synopsis.
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De verhalenheks
Very nice angle, I would like to read the whole story. are you going to elaborate it into a story because I'm curious
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rorocando
Interesting. a little strange that because hair but your imagination is very good in my hands I lose them all the same day
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Darwins Vision´s
It's a good story friend I congratulate you have agility to write so my support for you always heart for you
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Rosita&Charlene-Blogs-Creaties
Exciting story. I am very curious about the sequel, what will come from this. I'm sure to keep an eye on it for a while.
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Lisbeth Baloche
You stand out very well when it comes to writing, your story made me pay a lot of attention to how interesting everything is.
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j.o.h.a.n.d.e.r
@Lisbeth Baloche I have already published the first part of the first chapter
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abreusoleidy
I like the plot is interesting we'll see how this story develops, and at the end of everything that happens
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Los viajes por Azeroth!
A fresh and pleasant story friend I congratulate you on the way you write I saw that you uploaded the second part I will see it
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MAGALY
Hopefully Dave can find the origin of life is an unknown that many of us have, I will expect more from your story .
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Little Ekko
Is it a series or movie already released or a content made by you?. I'm curious because it's very entertaining and if it's for you I expect another post to follow the story.
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j.o.h.a.n.d.e.r
@Little Ekko if it is for me I will already publish the beginning of the story, I hope you like it
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Aaron Cabrera
I was struck by the story because of how it is described in a few words but that they are precise to the point, you wrote it?
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j.o.h.a.n.d.e.r
@Aaron Cabrera if I am writing a series, I will publish more. soon chapter 1
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After Movies
Reading the story that despite being short leaves you stunned by the depth of the theme and could represent it if this is carried on a large scale.
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gabrielagpo99
If, based on this, a complete story is made, I think it would have a lot of potential for a book and then for sale.
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rognnert
I thought it was an intriguing story where you want to read more and know the final outcome of this story.
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Carolina.kat
What a good story thank you for sharing your good inspiration to write me stand excellent what you tell us 👍
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Carmen Vidal
Hello, apparently, you are very creative for this art, I congratulate you, also the stories in this style I love, so I am eager to see how the plot goes on
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AleLiebe
Wow, what a great idea he had!! I want there to be more, I'll wait for more. I am eager to continue reading this story
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Live_love_laugh
Like many, I first wondered if this is a series on Netflix or a book or something, but then I see in your comments that it's something you want to publish yourself. In any case, the story appeals to
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j.o.h.a.n.d.e.r
@Live_love_laugh if I would like to go beyond a book, maybe one day it will be filmed
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roxana_ac
Is it a movie or a serial synopsis? Or is something that you are writing/creating by yourself? It sounds good.
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Ingeborgenzwerm
Wanted a very good morning from this side of the screen.
What a good start to a sequel story maybe ? Seems very interesting to me.
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j.o.h.a.n.d.e.r
@Ingeborgenzwerm if it will be from sucuela it will not be easy but I expect your support
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Juli.carmen
It is a very good and interesting story worthy of wanting to see even more I am eager to see what it continues in
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Kj
Very interesting story friend but I stayed on embers I want to see what happens with that challenge will overcome it and I want to see more
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Gustavo Perez
If it is a story that you have written, it sounds very interesting, although I was left with the doubt whether it is a movie or series because the subject matter is quite interesting.
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j.o.h.a.n.d.e.r
@Gustavo Perez almost all supernatural themes will be related to the number seven symbolizes perfection and deity that is why it will always be associated,
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Betania202
Wow will you do another part of this story? because it usually attracts attention like this with such a disconcerting development and well I hope to read more about this.
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Geisell
What an interesting story, undoubtedly catches you and makes you want to continue reading. I hope to read more about this story.
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lospvs
Interesting story with a good theme and it connects very well with our imagination, it was almost inevitable to imagine the whole scene of the proposal, I hope this one on your plans to share with us more of it.
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Leo 1
I suspect this is the prologue of a longer story. Despite the bad translation, the prologue is built up logical and expected. I'm waiting to see how this story will continue.
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j.o.h.a.n.d.e.r
@Leo 1 thanks , soon i will be writting more
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LeansixEnciso
Hey, you write very well, you are very creative, enigma in that story, I hope you continue to tell us, it looks interesting
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j.o.h.a.n.d.e.r
@LeansixEnciso thank you soon I will publish the first part of the first chapter
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bloguerouniversal
Interesting, I hope to read the continuation of your story soon, which I hope you will publish soon. Very well written, very well written
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anagabriela
I like history, you left us with the unknown, when you follow it? I love reading and writing, congratulations
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Diego G.O.
What a good story friend have you started hard here hehe I congratulate you on everything you have achieved I will give you my honors for you
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Gabriela
What is the plot that you have placed us very well elaborated friend the publication I wish you good luck and blessings amen
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Emanuelstyle
What a good story I congratulate you on a short but shocking story we hope second part hehe good luck in the next friend
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Adri Noor
I loved it. Let's hope it's not just here and you can extend the story a little, maybe add one or the other image.
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Sabina.
What more interesting story could you tell us more about it is curious to know stories like this lived and told more closely
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Antonio Escobar
A good story intense friend and has that spark of immersion to the reader. I congratulate you many successes in the next few
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MaferSlikp
boy let me tell you that you look wonderful the story, or the synopsis, I would like to continue reading what is coming no, leave us with the doubt hahaha
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willbelysy
I hope to be able to read soon what follows this story, because I am more eager to continue reading
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naf1971naf
looks very interesting @j.o.h.a.n.d.e.r you have to look and see it if it is on film or else the book to know the descenlanse
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j.o.h.a.n.d.e.r
@naf1971naf I'm working on it, it's not easy to create the characters but I'm letting my imagination fly
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Mary Ortega
It's a good eh interesting story I hope that beyond this story I think it's great thanks for sharing it with us
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Buena Música
It seems like an interesting plot, although it is also somewhat tragic to me. This is an introduction to something coming soon?
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j.o.h.a.n.d.e.r
@Buena Música is the introduction of a series that I will start publishing
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Maria
excellent mouth opener to start a reading of a story looks interesting the plot of it I would love to read it in full
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Naturefreak
That seems like an interesting book when it gets. Is it intended for adults or children or maybe both?
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j.o.h.a.n.d.e.r
@Naturefreak I will write more soon, the reading is adapted to young people over 13 years old
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Dewaputra
The synopsis sounds particularly attractive. Is it a book or a movie? Maybe you can add this, plus a link to more information? Thanks.
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j.o.h.a.n.d.e.r
@Dewaputra will be a series, I'm working on it to publish the first part
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ppoli61
What are you talking about? It is something that you have written yourself or it is a novel or a TV series? None of us have figured this out yet.
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enigma
This sounds like a fun story, but you don't tell where we can find it . Is it a series ? On Netflix ? A movie ? On TV ? Or is it about a book ?
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Bella
Oh, my God!
Is it a Book or is it about a Movie or Series?
I loved it!
I would like to know more, seriously. Could you give me more information to see this somehow?
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Eza Chavez
And then what's next . What a good introduction did you manage to capture my attention, I follow you and wait for the next chapter
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the_doctormom
I find the story so interesting....waiting for the chapters to come.The title goes well with the story from the synopsis
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Arukah Tsur
Story written or story busy been written? Either way sounds very interesting. Where do we get to see or read it?
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Niria
Very good story we always have a perfect imagination to make many beautiful horror love stories and many action stories are always good stories
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Estrella
Very good way to write I was always in suspense reading that is a good indication that you like to write
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Loes
And now I'm very curious about what happens, every time a hair falls, and if Dave finds the origin of life before the 7 days run out.
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Franny
Very nice story you have a lot of imagination when writing I congratulate you for that I hope to see more content like this from you
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j.o.h.a.n.d.e.r
@Franny It is not easy to create characters but I will let my imagination fly to make it a good story
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Marygrunge
wow what an interesting story I really loved the plot I would like to know what will continue and what will happen to this story friend
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Gollo
A somewhat scary story l life is one that must be appreciated, despite the circumstances it has had, there is a solution for things .
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fanny
It is an interesting story with a good message despite things God gives us reason to continue I hope to continue reading this story.
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Néstor David
Without a doubt, a profound story and that you leave us with that teaching about life, we must not take everything lightly and we must appreciate each moment no matter how hard it is.
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Michell
The story is great, I hope it continues more of this very interesting and scary, I think it is great that we shared them there
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Alfred
Fascinating the genre of terro and supernatural is very interesting to me, fascinated with the event I hope to see more of you here
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torres.anthonny
I was like. aja? as we say in maracaibo, what a gizzard!! I hope to read what follows my friend is very interesting your writing.
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DR. Marrufo
I would like to know the continuation of this story, it is a bit interesting and scary at the same time, you have more stories of this type ?
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Alberto
This reminds me of something like the hoop movies because of the fact that the 7 days is something very intriguing
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Freli
It is an extraordinary case, that is, it was seen that after that event he was unharmed? Something like An event out of the ordinary
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