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Bij Ann
@bijann1678396285 · 24 Jan 2022
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Poetry

#Gedicht
Peeping eyes
You are vigilant
so separate
Your leaves
adorn pride
the green faded
when it's autumn
still conquer your leaves
those vigilant red eyes
as a view on me
like a silent witness
it made me happy
your photo
C Photo and poem
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  • Comments (105)
Rudi
Very nice poem, nicely written. Poems about nature really appeal to me, I wrote a whole series of things about nature myself.
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Bij Ann
@Rudi
yes I have a lot of it, tomorrow is the day of poems
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Leo 1
Quite a nice poem, Ann. Only I would recommend that you place a white line between the close and that information words at the end. Now it bothers a bit when reading.
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Bij Ann
@Leo 1
you mean a line between let i modified it
good that you mention it
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Naturefreak
An ideal topic to write a poem about. Trees often inspire (at least with me) so nicely written.
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Bij Ann
@Naturefreak
yes if you are looking for you find what you are not looking
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enigma
Nicely written, Ann. Indeed, it looks like two red eyes, there in that crown of the tree. Are those apples or something? ?
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Bij Ann
@enigma
it was leaves, it's a very tall tree
the leaves have all reddened
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Ingeborgenzwerm
A very good evening from this side of the screen. Beautiful poem, full of feeling and emotions, along with the photo.
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Dewaputra
You have beautifully articulated that how autumn slowly but surely passes from green in autumn colors and people watch in the process. 👍👍
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Marc
Written very nicely in which you make a beautiful connection between what takes place in the photo and what the poem agrees.
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Bij Ann
@Marc De Bisschop
Thanks, that picture is crazy and I love that.
was right behind our house, those eyes were peeping!
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Rudy Siedlecki 🌳
Yes, nature is watching us anxiously; man, the most dangerous animal on Earth, the all-destructive virus in shoes.
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Bij Ann
@Rudy Siedlecki 🌳
you may say that, but now in corona time I see more in nature
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Dana
Very honest, short, powerful, sweet. A real Anngedicht
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Inspired
nice one
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Kshreyash
As always very good poem, well written, The context and the subject was used perfectly in your poem. Keep it up .
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torres.anthonny
I loved your poem, plus this one. part as a silent witness It made me happy. very good work friend, thanks for sharing.
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Mary Ortega
what a beautiful poetry i like you have an amazing talent for writing I hope you will always surprise us with your poems thanks for sharing it
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willbelysy
Like the previous poem, very sublime and delicate written, although they are small poems, reading them in pause makes it much more pleasant.
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Bella
Hey, but what a talent you have for poetry mate.
Thanks for sharing it with us
And wow! Really some eyes are reflected in the image hehehe
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Michell
what a beautiful poetry the photograph is very beautiful you have a good talent I congratulate you poetry about nature are always amazing
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Carmen Vidal
Hello, we love that you publish your poetry, I also write poetry, I hope to do it soon, successes and thanks for sharing them
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Sharon
hello ann another wonderful poem amazes me that ability to create poems to everything no matter what you are a great poet
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devian
It is a good friend poem I will be waiting for one for the day of love and friendship that is very close
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leid
another poem just as wonderful trees are the best we have and it's free so we have to appreciate them well done
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mlourdesbermudez
Hello, how are you. Good day. Nice poem, it is very well articulated or framed in the field of trees, it rhymes well. I wish he had a title.
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fanny
I think it's a good combination your poem and the photo are very beautiful everything that surrounds us in our nature.
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zulusys21
A beautiful display that people have poetry stored in their hearts and thank you very much for expressing and sharing it
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Gollo
You did a good job with the image and the poem seems good to me what you wrote is very nice 👍
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floresisaidi
Precious his poem that inspires through nature is something so natural that great talent friend
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Toto Animo
You really love nature. You can feel that in your beautiful poem.
Where the attached photo also fits well
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eddy
There is a very nice song to the tree that they taught us at school was about the tree and the love that we owe him since he offers us so much
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naiiu
It's a nice poem. I like it. Thank you for sharing it. I'm not very good at verses, but you can tell that you are.
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Nani
What a nice poem but for a tree I imagine that there is something else there, a background that has inspired you successes
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LCMA
A very cute poem always uses beautiful words to describe the object of desire, in this case, a tree.
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Dtorr
It is a nice poem we fear a song to the tree I don't know if it will be universal but we have it since childhood I know it
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Mrc
I'm not much of a poem, but it seems like a nice poem, at least I think so with my inexperience in it.
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Ari
I don't know what a gedicht is, but I assume it's a style of poem that has worked out well for you according to the comments.
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rosarr
a nice poem I like how you placed it my dad liked the poems a lot but they were extensive and very beautiful
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sofibrav
What a nice poem I am not one of the people who write them but if I like to read them and this one is very nice thanks for sharing
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Franny
What a beauty of a very beautiful poem perfect to dedicate it to someone special and the photo I love how it combines with that poem
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AleLiebe
Oh what a funny poem lol
Thanks for sharing it with us
What beautiful words for the poem you chose.
You are a poet?
Or do you do it just for hobby?
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roxana_ac
Very nice poem, the nature is a great inspiration's source. I liked the photo, the tree is looking at me 😊
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Animal lover
What a beautiful poem this one is very nicely written about that tree and in the picture it looks like the tree has two eyes beautiful picture.
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MAGALY
Nice words, how good it is to find anywhere the necessary inspiration to write something very beautiful, I admire your ease to do that.
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Kj
I am very struck by that tree because it really seems to have watchful eyes I don't know how you managed it but it looks great on you
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Arshi
Very beautiful poem !! Hope you are doing good. Photo is clicked good too. Trees give peace 😊 thanks for sharing.
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Lety Zambrano Cartaya
I love your poems it's very beautiful and cozy here in Madrid I really enjoy autumn it's a lovely and warm season
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Florencia Sendell
I love photography reminds me a lot of something homey something organic and the poem is beautifully luxurious my honor for you
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Juli.carmen
What a good poem you have a lot of inspiration just like a good photo alluciva to the subject with those leaves that resemble watchful eyes excellent
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Nimona Albelis
Beautiful like that without more than living poetry and those who distribute it all over the world who live forever
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Neider
I love how photography kindly coincides with that beautiful poetry that you give us many congratulations for your work and time
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RotsenAFM
I love poetry next to my cup of coffee I don't quite understand the honors I haven't used them yet so you'll be my first time with it
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rorocando
Very timely your poem in those watchful eyes. Even if it seems a little disheveled Very nice poem for your watchman tree.
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Darwins Vision´s
What a beautiful publication I love poems I would love if you had placed a photo to accompany with this jewel, greetings
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DR. Marrufo
green fades after the arrival of autumn, sublime, delicate and fragrant, that's what makes those poetic lines feel.
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rockstar
this well-crafted poem and its rhymes are very good I loved the photo of the birds in the trees
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Los viajes por Azeroth!
I'm not much of a poetry reader, but this one has something special, something that makes you feel at home. I congratulate you on it.
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leninJM
It is a nice poem, it can also be dedicated to the mango tree or any other since it is generic
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Elenavas
Very beautiful the poem, written with pure heart. It is a tree that undergoes transformation due to the climate but it is still beautiful and inspiring
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Gustavo Perez
Very well that you use nature to believe that beautiful poem, really when we use our environment to inspire us, a good result like this can come out.
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Maria
nature inspires us every day, beautiful poem, I liked it, I hope to read the next one, congratulations good achievement and thank you for sharing
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Ernesto Amador
I have to confess that this poem is a majesty written and above all for which it is dedicated. Thank you for sharing it.
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Alfred
The poem and the photo have a perfect synchrony, I really appreciate the art you do with all your words, reading is something I love, and more this type of writing
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Daniel
You're great at making poems, could you tell me how you do to get inspired to make your poems? It makes me curious
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Diego G.O.
It's a nice poem you make, but I think it's strange that you have selectivity when it comes to answering comments.
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Néstor David
A relaxing poem, a magnificent way of writing I have exhausted my honors since early but I promise I will fill you with them. You're great at doing what you do.
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Gabriela
Sweet poetry of the beautiful seasons of the year I like them very much I will honor you for it congratulations on your work
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Alberto
Your poems are usually very lengthening, cute and very complete. I like the creativity you possess for it is a wonder
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Freli
It is a beautiful poetry besides the presentation you make looks so beautiful and beautiful the photograph representing the poem
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Emanuelstyle
What a good poetry for this Monday to start with enough energy and to be able to see the world from another perspective thanks for sharing
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Adri Noor
It is a beautiful and pleasant seasonal poem from the moment you named Autumn and I love it is my favorite season of the year
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Antonio Escobar
I loved the phrase that says green faded, when it's autumn I think it's fantastic the way you put words together
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Estrella
I love your poetry they are a delight for me, I will give you honor because you really deserve it greatly
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